Tale Chapter 1 - A New Book

Words From Author : Ok here it is , chapter one of my new novel and upcoming comic.I changed the novel's name from "Choice" to "Tale" because I don't want my novel just to be based on making choices , boring.By the way , MERRY CHRISTMAS.Please comment if theres grammar problems or if you like the story.

In the kingdom of Iris lies thousands of tales regarding people travel around the world just to get something they want.Obstacles and dangers lurk in everywhere they go , still they keep on.They keep saying life is not complete if we keep isolating ourselves from the world by staying at home and doing work instead if you travel around the world and meet new people , new places and new wonders.They would care nothing , all they do is sell their houses and then travel the world.But now , a new story is about to be unfold as a new adventurer is about to start a whole new ... Tale.

In the snowy mountains of Mount Frostbite , theres an abandoned tent sitting on top of the cliffs of the mountains.Inside the tent lies tools for a writer to use to write his books , a warm bed just recently been slept on and a baby's cradle that has wrinkles that indicated that someone had just gone out from slumber ...

"SON !!! Where are you son !!!" a man shouted as he desperately finding his son in the cold mountains.The mountains are snowing heavily and a normal child can't stand the temperature for long."Son !!! Shit...Why must I forgot to close the tent's entrance , now he is gone and I can't find him anywhere ..." the man said.The man slowly walked along the cliffs just urging to find his son , he shouted alot and he was exhausted from all the walking.

Suddenly , in the midst of the blizzard.He heard a boy's crying from a nearby cavern , he rushed to the cavern while shouting "Son , is that you ? Please answer me son".When he arrived there , all he saw was just a rock...."Why must the mountains playing tricks on me !!! WHY !!!".He was depressed , he went out of the cavern and was about to give up.In not a moment too soon , he saw papers flying around in a line as they are leading him to somewhere.He followed the trail of papers and found his son shivering and trying to get warm by hugging a book.The man immediately rushed over to hug his son and shouted "I finally found you son !!!".But he was foolish and the loud shout triggered an avalanche , he was shocked when he saw a waves of snow coming down from the mountain's higher ground.He immediately hugged his son around his arms but it was too late , the avalanche swallowed the two whole and after a while total silent...

The next day , the blizzard stopped and warm sunlight started to shone on the mountains.A grandmaster monk from a nearby mountain temple was gathering ingredients for his ritual.He ordered the two apprentices to collect Ice Herbs from the lower levels of the mountains while he stroll around the cliff sides in search of white snow rabbits.While the grandmaster monk was searching for the rabbits , a white rabbit suddenly appeared before him and taunt the grandmaster monk.He was furious and chased the rabbit down.But the rabbit was too fast not like the other smaller rabbits , this rabbit was an alpha male and an alpha male is much more faster and stronger than other rabbits of the region.

The grandmaster was about to let up as the rabbit was too fast for him but he still kept on trying to catch him as he was wanting to have a big dinner that night.But suddenly , the rabbit stopped on top of a lump of snow.The grandmaster stopped right infront of him and was curious why did he stopped.The rabbit then kick the lump of snow and revealed a boy carrying a book and a Shadowglory flower in his hands.The grandmaster was shocked and ignored the alpha male white rabbit and carried the boy in his arms.As he carried the boy , the sunlight around him shone brighter and warmer.They boy was unconcious but still alive , it was a miracle...and the book on the boy's hand was named ... Tale.

Chapter one complete - By Nicholas Ng Hwa Ee

Kingdom of Iris Index -
The Snowy Mountains of Frostbite
-The Frostbite mountains are one of the biggest mountains in the world of Iris.It has a million years of history and has shown it has spiritual strength.Thats why theres a temple on the mountains as the monk wanted to be close with the spirits.The mountain's unique is that there are actually warm parts of the mountains , some parts of the mountains have trees and lagoons because it has much more spiritual strength than any other parts of the mountains.But the mountains could be tricky and could play tricks with your mind.Illusions and mirages are common to spot here as the mountains show what you want in your life.

Ops my pencil is broken , XD



ncie story, i like it! ^^
waiting 4 ur second chapter ~


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